Globalization would finish small scale industries in india
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Globalization would finish small scale industries in india
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Introduction
On a busy Monday morning in bazars of Hyderabad with full of kindling street foods starting from Burger to Hot dogs, Ravi and Meena always chose to have their favourite 'Hot chocolate', without even knowing their origin, Hidden 'globalisation' had brought both merits and demerits in Indian society. let us explore more about the future prospects of globalisation and how it impacts the Indian society in a logical manner. First of all, the era of globalisation started since the time immemorial, However, the shift from planned to open economy in 1990s, brought the world more closer to us in various spheres for instance, a cricket match held in england, is continuously telecasted in realtime is because of globalisation of technology. Sides of globalisation As a coin has 2 sides, globalisation also has 2 sides, the positive side of globalisation, gets reflected in every aspects of modern life, can history forget the art of conveying messages for long distance through birds (or), writing letters in palm leaf with birds feathers, but now which is in seconds, technology has reduced the gap between communication, making our interpersonal connections more stronger in our dignified lives. But, it does not stop with communication, it has blended us altogether, without even thinking about your lifestyle, wherever we see in offices or schools or halls, people get dressed up either in their formals that is shirts and pants with ties, belts, shoes and women in chudidhars, where does this influence come from, is from our ancestors or through our evolution.
On a busy Monday morning in bazars of Hyderabad with full of kindling street foods starting from Burger to Hot dogs, Ravi and Meena always chose to have their favourite 'Hot chocolate', without even knowing their origin, Hidden 'globalisation' had brought both merits and demerits in Indian society. let us explore more about the future prospects of globalisation and how it impacts the Indian society in a logical manner. First of all, the era of globalisation started since the time immemorial, However, the shift from planned to open economy in 1990s, brought the world more closer to us in various spheres for instance, a cricket match held in england, is continuously telecasted in realtime is because of globalisation of technology. Sides of globalisation As a coin has 2 sides, globalisation also has 2 sides, the positive side of globalisation, gets reflected in every aspects of modern life, can history forget the art of conveying messages for long distance through birds (or), writing letters in palm leaf with birds feathers, but now which is in seconds, technology has reduced the gap between communication, making our interpersonal connections more stronger in our dignified lives. But, it does not stop with communication, it has blended us altogether, without even thinking about your lifestyle, wherever we see in offices or schools or halls, people get dressed up either in their formals that is shirts and pants with ties, belts, shoes and women in chudidhars, where does this influence come from, is from our ancestors or through our evolution.
Impact of Globalization on Culture and Society
It is because of other cultures influence, transformation from modern joint family to modern family / nuclear family reality have made numerous families speechless. It was in 2016, where two oldage couple were sent to oldage home by their own daughters for the sake of money, & wealth, pointed to be noted here is that (family) onset of oldage homes is not globalisation, but the thread of the that tied the knot (children) got broken due to emergence of materialism and selfish attitude, got evolved along with this mindset. Other side of globalisation, is that uneven distribution of benefits of globalisation, the service sector of Indian economy gained prominence, whereas the manufacturing remained down also, traditional handicrafts, handlooms, artisan industries disappeared due to lack of patronage. one such important craftwork at danger is 'Hand weaving' through handlooms, reduced its importance, leaving at the verge of extinction, questions our attitude towards Heritage and culture. The fear of finishing small scale industries in India, holding the world's major population in just 2.5% of world's area, remains a challenge, with adequate employment, promoting economic growth, and eradicating poverty path towards a inclusive nation. requires, meticulous planning in the era of globalisation. According to current statistics, about 7% of the population were engaged in local livelihoods like street vendors, small scale cottage industries, Globalisation has options to replace them completely, by promoting/permitting in single brand multiple retailing would erode the scale of small business, like Walmart, Reebok, which were expanded multi brand business would affect the economy, by placing all goods in a single place. Importance of small scale Industries to India is enormous, as the collaboration/organisation/cooperation forms the base of entrepreneurial society, which makes every individual to engage and participate in the society through coordination for example, the evolution of the famous cooperative in small village of Anand in Gujarat, today remains a renowned brand in dairy sector 'AMUL' has its foundation initially a small cooperative. It does not mean that small industries would not survive globalisation, but at times, globalisation makes the small industries survive; turning towards the world of spices, the controversial biopiracy of turmeric, starts from story of Aachi, started as initially a small company in erode, later emerged as big giant after its exports to multiple countries after knowing the importance of this antibacterial magical ingredient in cookings. However, both sides cannot determine the impact that globalisation had made in ground reality.
It is because of other cultures influence, transformation from modern joint family to modern family / nuclear family reality have made numerous families speechless. It was in 2016, where two oldage couple were sent to oldage home by their own daughters for the sake of money, & wealth, pointed to be noted here is that (family) onset of oldage homes is not globalisation, but the thread of the that tied the knot (children) got broken due to emergence of materialism and selfish attitude, got evolved along with this mindset. Other side of globalisation, is that uneven distribution of benefits of globalisation, the service sector of Indian economy gained prominence, whereas the manufacturing remained down also, traditional handicrafts, handlooms, artisan industries disappeared due to lack of patronage. one such important craftwork at danger is 'Hand weaving' through handlooms, reduced its importance, leaving at the verge of extinction, questions our attitude towards Heritage and culture. The fear of finishing small scale industries in India, holding the world's major population in just 2.5% of world's area, remains a challenge, with adequate employment, promoting economic growth, and eradicating poverty path towards a inclusive nation. requires, meticulous planning in the era of globalisation. According to current statistics, about 7% of the population were engaged in local livelihoods like street vendors, small scale cottage industries, Globalisation has options to replace them completely, by promoting/permitting in single brand multiple retailing would erode the scale of small business, like Walmart, Reebok, which were expanded multi brand business would affect the economy, by placing all goods in a single place. Importance of small scale Industries to India is enormous, as the collaboration/organisation/cooperation forms the base of entrepreneurial society, which makes every individual to engage and participate in the society through coordination for example, the evolution of the famous cooperative in small village of Anand in Gujarat, today remains a renowned brand in dairy sector 'AMUL' has its foundation initially a small cooperative. It does not mean that small industries would not survive globalisation, but at times, globalisation makes the small industries survive; turning towards the world of spices, the controversial biopiracy of turmeric, starts from story of Aachi, started as initially a small company in erode, later emerged as big giant after its exports to multiple countries after knowing the importance of this antibacterial magical ingredient in cookings. However, both sides cannot determine the impact that globalisation had made in ground reality.
Conclusion
Recent incidents like issue of Aloo Tikki by McDonalds in India, ban on sale of non-veg during navarathiri points to the view that globalisation has not resulted in isolation, but resulted in glocalisation, hybrid of global and local cultures, moving forward with a giant leap in this era of technology. The wise small scale industries would cope the globalisation, by becoming more adaptable to the emerging challenges of monopoly in market, like ecommerce giants, 'Amazon, Flipkart' now increasingly welcoming other platforms like nykaa, myntra, through these local people market their product in a efficient manner makes a good example of acclamatising to the need of the hour in modern life. So, the focus should be on capacity building and training to small scale industries, not on restricting the global accessibility to resources. Whether it is fords or suzuki, they can decide their audience or customers, but the core of small scale industries; should be in such a way that their efforts knocks every door in world to invite / please them with their unique service / good through the medium of globalisation; whether it is hot dog / hot chocolate, the taste of tongue remains delicious only when, the freedom of tongue is given its own chance to take its wants, so as the globalisation, has done many best, it is us, who decide what we want / not, not influencers.
Recent incidents like issue of Aloo Tikki by McDonalds in India, ban on sale of non-veg during navarathiri points to the view that globalisation has not resulted in isolation, but resulted in glocalisation, hybrid of global and local cultures, moving forward with a giant leap in this era of technology. The wise small scale industries would cope the globalisation, by becoming more adaptable to the emerging challenges of monopoly in market, like ecommerce giants, 'Amazon, Flipkart' now increasingly welcoming other platforms like nykaa, myntra, through these local people market their product in a efficient manner makes a good example of acclamatising to the need of the hour in modern life. So, the focus should be on capacity building and training to small scale industries, not on restricting the global accessibility to resources. Whether it is fords or suzuki, they can decide their audience or customers, but the core of small scale industries; should be in such a way that their efforts knocks every door in world to invite / please them with their unique service / good through the medium of globalisation; whether it is hot dog / hot chocolate, the taste of tongue remains delicious only when, the freedom of tongue is given its own chance to take its wants, so as the globalisation, has done many best, it is us, who decide what we want / not, not influencers.
The Art of First Impressions
Your introduction is your one chance to make the examiner want to read more. Think of it as a movie trailer: grab attention, make a promise, and create anticipation. Most students start with definitions - the essay equivalent of 'once upon a time.' Distinguished essays start with intrigue.
"The introduction touches on relevant themes but lacks an impactful hook and a clear thesis statement. The organization needs refinement to engage the reader effectively."
"The opening scenario of Ravi and Meena provides a relatable context that highlights the influence of globalization."
"The hook is weak and fails to grab immediate attention; the thesis lacks a clear argument, and the roadmap is under-developed."
"Start with a strong hook that captures interest, clearly articulate a debatable thesis, and provide a roadmap that previews key arguments."
You Have:
- Scenario
- General statement about globalization
You Need:
- Engaging hook Hook
- Clear and debatable thesis Thesis
- Detailed roadmap Roadmap
The Hook: Your First 10 Words
The hook is your opening punch. It should make the examiner's eyebrows rise, create a question in their mind, or present a tension that demands resolution. Definitions don't do this. Questions, paradoxes, and vivid scenarios do.
Most students start with 'X has been important since ancient times.' This is true but boring. Your hook should be surprising, not safe.
"On a busy Monday morning in bazars of Hyderabad with full of kindling street foods starting from Burger to Hot dogs..."
1 Provocative Question
"How has globalization transformed simple preferences like choosing hot chocolate into a reflection of broader societal changes?"
Why it works: This question immediately invites the reader to consider the broader implications of globalization.
2 Paradox Hook
"In a world more interconnected than ever, globalization often isolates us from our true cultural identities."
Why it works: This paradox highlights a conflict inherent in globalization that intrigues the reader.
3 Scenario Hook
"In the bustling streets of Hyderabad, the aroma of global cuisine mingles with local traditions, revealing the complexities of globalization."
Why it works: This revised scenario paints a vivid image while connecting immediately to the topic of globalization.
Ask a question that challenges assumptions or creates intellectual tension
In an age of [modern reality], why do [surprising behavior/belief] persist?
Present a contradiction that creates cognitive dissonance
[Concept] promises [X], yet delivers [opposite/unexpected].
Paint a vivid picture with unexpected actors or situations
A [unexpected person 1] does [X]. A [unexpected person 2] does [Y]. [Pattern/Insight].
Lead with a surprising number that demands explanation
[Surprising statistic]. Behind this number lies [deeper truth].
X has been important since ancient times.In today's world, X is very relevant.X is a topic of great significance.Since time immemorial, X has...X can be defined as...
"The first sentence tells the examiner who they're dealing with. A definition says 'average student.' A paradox says 'someone who thinks differently.' First impressions stick."
Foundation: Thesis + Roadmap
Your thesis is your promise to the reader - what you're going to prove. Your roadmap is the journey you'll take them on. Together, they set up your entire essay. A weak foundation means the examiner isn't sure where you're going.
Thesis without a position is just a topic sentence. Roadmap without anticipation is just a table of contents.
"Hidden 'globalisation' had brought both merits and demerits in Indian society."
1 Crisp Stand
"While globalization has rejuvenated India's economy, it threatens to obliterate small-scale industries, forcing us to reconsider its future."
Why it works: This statement asserts a clear position that can be debated and motivates further exploration.
2 Debatable Angle
"Many celebrate globalization for its economic benefits; however, it poses significant risks to small-scale industries, which form the backbone of India's economy."
Why it works: This version acknowledges a counter-argument, making the thesis more engaging.
3 Sophisticated Balance
"Globalization presents a paradox: it drives economic integration while simultaneously threatening the cultural and economic foundations of small industries in India."
Why it works: This nuanced statement recognizes the complexity of globalization’s impact.
Crisp Stand
Clear, direct position with analytical edge
Debatable Angle
Acknowledge counter-view, then take position
Sophisticated Balance
Embrace complexity with a nuanced position
"let us explore more about the future prospects of globalisation and how it impacts the Indian society in a logical manner."
1 Natural Flow
"This essay will first explore the cultural impacts of globalization, followed by its economic consequences, and conclude with a reflection on the future of small industries in India."
Why it works: This approach provides a clear organization and engages curiosity about the specific arguments.
2 Question-Based
"What does the rise of global brands mean for local industries? This essay will address these questions and delve into globalization's multifaceted impacts."
Why it works: This format frames the essay as an exploration and incites curiosity about the answers.
3 Thematic Preview
"By examining globalization's cultural and economic dimensions, this essay will reveal the intertwined fates of tradition and modernity in Indian society."
Why it works: This thematic approach subtly warns the reader without revealing too much, maintaining intrigue.
Natural Flow
Weave structure into narrative without listing
Question-Based
Frame structure as questions to be answered
Thematic Preview
Drop intriguing references without explaining
Thesis: "A clear thesis tells the examiner 'I'm going to argue something.' This creates anticipation and gives them a lens to evaluate your essay. No thesis = no argument = lower marks."
Roadmap: "A good roadmap tells the examiner 'this essay is organized and going somewhere interesting.' A list tells them 'this student is mechanical.' Anticipation beats information."
The Opening Polish
Your introduction is the most scrutinized part of your essay. Every word matters. We'll teach you three style techniques that instantly elevate your opening: Parallelism, Antithesis, and Crescendo.
Introductions often suffer from 'playing it safe.' This is exactly when you need to take stylistic risks.
"The language shows potential but lacks clarity and sophistication."
Parallelism
MissingAntithesis
MissingCrescendo
Missing"On a busy Monday morning in bazars of Hyderabad with full of kindling street foods starting from Burger to Hot dogs..."
"On a busy Monday morning in bazars of Hyderabad with full of kindling street foods starting from Burger to Hot dogs..."
"As the sun rises over Hyderabad's bustling bazaars, a sip of hot chocolate symbolizes the intricate dance between local traditions and global influences."
Parallelism
Repeating grammatical structure for rhythm and emphasis
Antithesis
Placing contrasting ideas in parallel structure to highlight tension
Crescendo
Building from small to large, quiet to loud, personal to universal
The Complete Transformation
See how all the elements come together. This is what a distinguished introduction looks like.
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Words AfterOn a busy Monday morning in bazars of Hyderabad with full of kindling street foods starting from Burger to Hot dogs, Ravi and Meena always chose to have their favourite 'Hot chocolate', without even knowing their origin, Hidden 'globalisation' had brought both merits and demerits in Indian society. let us explore more about the future prospects of globalisation and how it impacts the Indian society in a logical manner.
As the sun rises over Hyderabad's bustling bazaars, a sip of hot chocolate symbolizes the intricate dance between local traditions and global influences. While globalization rejuvenates India’s economy, it poses a significant threat to small-scale industries, demanding a careful examination of its future. This essay will first explore the cultural impacts of globalization, followed by its economic consequences, and conclude with a reflection on the future of small industries in India.
hook
Introduced an engaging scenario that captures attention.
thesis
Formulated a clear, debatable position on the impacts of globalization.
roadmap
Provided a structured preview of the essay's arguments.
language
Enhanced clarity, coherence, and engagement.
Ideal Structure
- Hook (attention)
- Thesis (promise)
- Roadmap (anticipation)
Common Mistake
DefinitionVague statementList of sections
Most introductions are forgettable because they play it safe. Distinguished introductions take risks: provocative hooks, debatable theses, and roadmaps that tease.
First Impression Effect
The first paragraph colors the entire reading experience. Start strong and you're read generously.
Differentiation Signal
A unique opening signals 'this student is different.' The examiner pays more attention.
Thesis as Lens
A clear thesis gives the examiner a framework. Without it, they're lost and frustrated.
Anticipation Value
A good roadmap creates eagerness. The examiner looks forward to each section instead of dreading it.
Stage 1 Definition Writer
Focus: Stop opening with definitions
Goal: Recognize boring openings
Stage 2 Hook Crafter
Focus: Master 3 hook types
Goal: Grab attention consistently
Stage 3 Thesis Builder
Focus: State debatable positions
Goal: Make clear arguments
Stage 4 Master Opener
Focus: Integrate all elements with style
Goal: Unforgettable introductions