constitutional ethos and current issues
41/100Performance Report
constitutional ethos and current issues
Needs workScore Breakdown
Introduction
Constitutional ethos & the current issues. (1200 words) On the eve of independence in 1947 the literacy rate of the nation was 12% and the GDP was 3%, the various elites and philosophers was of the opinion that the India will be fragmented due to its plural demography and the illiteracy, yet the architects of constitution led by BR Ambedkar focused on the basic ethos of humanity and established the Republic Democratic India with focus on equality, justice, liberty, fraternity, socialism and secular aspects which not only led to united India but a prosperous and evolved India. Constitutional ethos means that we should not only respect the legal books and its word but also the spirit and nature of the same that is equality, fraternity, justice and secular aspects. In this essay we are going to discuss the various constitutional morality and ethos that held the nation in its true form like equality, fraternity, justice, liberty and the relation of these ethos with the current scenario and after that we will discuss the contradiction b/w ethos and issues and the remedy of the same and the way forward. Constitution: More than a legal book/manual.
Constitutional ethos & the current issues. (1200 words) On the eve of independence in 1947 the literacy rate of the nation was 12% and the GDP was 3%, the various elites and philosophers was of the opinion that the India will be fragmented due to its plural demography and the illiteracy, yet the architects of constitution led by BR Ambedkar focused on the basic ethos of humanity and established the Republic Democratic India with focus on equality, justice, liberty, fraternity, socialism and secular aspects which not only led to united India but a prosperous and evolved India. Constitutional ethos means that we should not only respect the legal books and its word but also the spirit and nature of the same that is equality, fraternity, justice and secular aspects. In this essay we are going to discuss the various constitutional morality and ethos that held the nation in its true form like equality, fraternity, justice, liberty and the relation of these ethos with the current scenario and after that we will discuss the contradiction b/w ethos and issues and the remedy of the same and the way forward. Constitution: More than a legal book/manual.
The Role and Nature of the Constitution
Constitution is often described as the legal entity with focus on laws, articles, schedules. But the role of Indian constitution is more than that as it is not only the legal book but the moral and democratic book. The Indian constitution is of the nature that it emphasize on various moral and social responsibilities. The responsibilities is not only on the institutions but on the individuals also like the fundamental rights are the source of individual freedom but liability on the state/institution. DPSP's are the framework for the state for social and economic welfare. Fundamental duties are there for demanding responsibility from the citizens. Thus the constitution is not a book but a ethical framework that reminds the state of social, political and economic welfare and citizens of their duties, so it influence every sector of the country for e.g. A majority community respecting the rights of minority, offices treating poor and rich alike, member of parliament listening the demand of the public - these constitute the example of ethos of constitution.
Constitution is often described as the legal entity with focus on laws, articles, schedules. But the role of Indian constitution is more than that as it is not only the legal book but the moral and democratic book. The Indian constitution is of the nature that it emphasize on various moral and social responsibilities. The responsibilities is not only on the institutions but on the individuals also like the fundamental rights are the source of individual freedom but liability on the state/institution. DPSP's are the framework for the state for social and economic welfare. Fundamental duties are there for demanding responsibility from the citizens. Thus the constitution is not a book but a ethical framework that reminds the state of social, political and economic welfare and citizens of their duties, so it influence every sector of the country for e.g. A majority community respecting the rights of minority, offices treating poor and rich alike, member of parliament listening the demand of the public - these constitute the example of ethos of constitution.
Equality: Challenges and Continuing Inequality
After discussing the nature of constitution we are going to discuss the various ethos and the issues. Equality: Difficult to achieve? The basic fundamental approach of the Britishers was of inequality and eradication of inequality was the main focus of the freedom fighters and social reformer which led to freedom of India. As it was the biggest promise of the constitution so the architects of the constitution focused on equality and embeded fundamental rights like Article 14-18 - Right to equality and gender and - right against discrimination. - Fair wage act, gender equality and reservation for ST's/SC's and womens. which are of affirmative nature. Despite all the efforts, Indian society continues to remain unequal and inequality exists in different form like social, political, economic, educational and cultural. The recent CUP protest was due to NEET paper leak and other exam leaks in recent times demanding the institutional reforms along with educational and economic opportunity for all. The protest advocates for equality of opportunity and right to protest under Article 14 & 19 respectively. Now we have discussed the equality and issues we are now going to discuss freedom of speech and issues of defamation.
After discussing the nature of constitution we are going to discuss the various ethos and the issues. Equality: Difficult to achieve? The basic fundamental approach of the Britishers was of inequality and eradication of inequality was the main focus of the freedom fighters and social reformer which led to freedom of India. As it was the biggest promise of the constitution so the architects of the constitution focused on equality and embeded fundamental rights like Article 14-18 - Right to equality and gender and - right against discrimination. - Fair wage act, gender equality and reservation for ST's/SC's and womens. which are of affirmative nature. Despite all the efforts, Indian society continues to remain unequal and inequality exists in different form like social, political, economic, educational and cultural. The recent CUP protest was due to NEET paper leak and other exam leaks in recent times demanding the institutional reforms along with educational and economic opportunity for all. The protest advocates for equality of opportunity and right to protest under Article 14 & 19 respectively. Now we have discussed the equality and issues we are now going to discuss freedom of speech and issues of defamation.
Freedom of Speech and Defamation
Freedom and Defamation:- Sedition under 124A of IPC and right to freedom of speech under Article 19(1)a and right to life and personal liberty under article 21 contradict each other. The constitution enable the citizens to question those in power and this is the foundation of democracy as this limits the power of govt and require accountability but the recent social media rise has challenged the above rights. The rise of deepfakes, Artificial intel and other algorithmic operation not only led to integrity, defamation but also led to national security risks. The challenge remains there to balance the two. e.g In Subramanian Swamy vs UOI the article 499 which is defamation as criminal offence was challenged and court order to protect freedom of speech, the reputation of individual can not be nullified. As we have now discussed the equality and freedom of speech now we will discuss the federalism as constitution ethos and the challenges to obtain it.
Freedom and Defamation:- Sedition under 124A of IPC and right to freedom of speech under Article 19(1)a and right to life and personal liberty under article 21 contradict each other. The constitution enable the citizens to question those in power and this is the foundation of democracy as this limits the power of govt and require accountability but the recent social media rise has challenged the above rights. The rise of deepfakes, Artificial intel and other algorithmic operation not only led to integrity, defamation but also led to national security risks. The challenge remains there to balance the two. e.g In Subramanian Swamy vs UOI the article 499 which is defamation as criminal offence was challenged and court order to protect freedom of speech, the reputation of individual can not be nullified. As we have now discussed the equality and freedom of speech now we will discuss the federalism as constitution ethos and the challenges to obtain it.
Federalism and Centralising Tendency
Federalism and Centralising Tendency: The Indian Constitution advocates for cooperative federalism that is trusting the immense diversity while maintaining the Unity. State and Union as partners for development. The current issues regarding the federalism as the basic feature of the constitution is that the distribution remains blurred, GST compensation framework and the recent issue of role of Governor. Though the issues are main focus of recent governments, to eradicate this we not only need the cooperative federalism but we need collaborative federalism as advocated by ARC report, Punchhi commission and Sarkaria Commission.
Federalism and Centralising Tendency: The Indian Constitution advocates for cooperative federalism that is trusting the immense diversity while maintaining the Unity. State and Union as partners for development. The current issues regarding the federalism as the basic feature of the constitution is that the distribution remains blurred, GST compensation framework and the recent issue of role of Governor. Though the issues are main focus of recent governments, to eradicate this we not only need the cooperative federalism but we need collaborative federalism as advocated by ARC report, Punchhi commission and Sarkaria Commission.
Secularism and Its Challenges
Now we will look into the Secularism and issues and remedification of the same. The secularism in India is different from the west as in west there is arm length distance between the two that is state and religion but in India we focus on "Sarva Dharm Sambhav" that is respecting all religions equally. the word is added by the 42nd amendment act but the nature of Indian society was always like that from centuries. The plural nature of Indian society was the basis of secularism in India as the society not only tolerated the others but also understands each other, this is why India being a pluralist and diverse country also a worlds largest democratic country. Though the diversity is there but the recent issues has eroded the very basic postulate of the constitutional ethos. The various examples are present there like the Religion based politics led to communal politics and Hate speech. The current issue of UCC which is enshrined in article 44 of constitution led to debate between the Article 25 and Article 44. Recent debate of Citizen Amendment bill has also sparked, with emphasis that religion as a factor for determining citizenship.
Now we will look into the Secularism and issues and remedification of the same. The secularism in India is different from the west as in west there is arm length distance between the two that is state and religion but in India we focus on "Sarva Dharm Sambhav" that is respecting all religions equally. the word is added by the 42nd amendment act but the nature of Indian society was always like that from centuries. The plural nature of Indian society was the basis of secularism in India as the society not only tolerated the others but also understands each other, this is why India being a pluralist and diverse country also a worlds largest democratic country. Though the diversity is there but the recent issues has eroded the very basic postulate of the constitutional ethos. The various examples are present there like the Religion based politics led to communal politics and Hate speech. The current issue of UCC which is enshrined in article 44 of constitution led to debate between the Article 25 and Article 44. Recent debate of Citizen Amendment bill has also sparked, with emphasis that religion as a factor for determining citizenship.
Justice: Principles and Challenges
Now after discussing the secularism, we are going to discuss justice as constitutional ethos and challenges to it. Justice: 'A fair treatment' Justice is defined as the fair treatment and equal distribution of resources, and opportunities - social, political & economic. The word is enshrined in the preamble of India as the basic constitutional ethos. Justice is linked to rule of law and independent judiciary. The justice is often meant that equal treatment for all irrespective of position, influence and wealth but the current issue is that efficiency of the justice system. The pendency of the cases is the main concern and the undertrials. For eg. there are 5 crore cases pending in India with 75% plus in subordinate and district courts. More than 70% of Indian prisons consists of the undertrials. This is due to shortage of judges, adjournments and inadequate facilities.
Now after discussing the secularism, we are going to discuss justice as constitutional ethos and challenges to it. Justice: 'A fair treatment' Justice is defined as the fair treatment and equal distribution of resources, and opportunities - social, political & economic. The word is enshrined in the preamble of India as the basic constitutional ethos. Justice is linked to rule of law and independent judiciary. The justice is often meant that equal treatment for all irrespective of position, influence and wealth but the current issue is that efficiency of the justice system. The pendency of the cases is the main concern and the undertrials. For eg. there are 5 crore cases pending in India with 75% plus in subordinate and district courts. More than 70% of Indian prisons consists of the undertrials. This is due to shortage of judges, adjournments and inadequate facilities.
Citizen Participation and Constitutional Morality
"Justice delayed is Justice denied" In order to overcome the issues of justice the role of institution like judiciary is more than anyone else because it is the "guardian of Constitution". There is need of alternative dispute resolution like mediation, arbitration and counselling along with infrastructure improvement & appointment of judges like the law commission has advocated for 50 judges/million instead of the current capacity of 21 judges/million. The role of civil societies and NGOs are also vital along with the role of citizens. An aware citizen is need of the hour. Now we will discuss the role of citizen and the participative nature of the society for enhancing the constitutional ethos.
"Justice delayed is Justice denied" In order to overcome the issues of justice the role of institution like judiciary is more than anyone else because it is the "guardian of Constitution". There is need of alternative dispute resolution like mediation, arbitration and counselling along with infrastructure improvement & appointment of judges like the law commission has advocated for 50 judges/million instead of the current capacity of 21 judges/million. The role of civil societies and NGOs are also vital along with the role of citizens. An aware citizen is need of the hour. Now we will discuss the role of citizen and the participative nature of the society for enhancing the constitutional ethos.
The Role of Fraternity in Society
Citizens and local participation: Constitution gave the guarantee of equality, justice, fraternity but only giving the right does not ensure the same one need accessibility and affordability also for example the 73rd & 74th CAA give the democratic participation and Article 39 advocated for free legal aid which will enhance the participation of every sector of citizens like reservation for SC & ST and 1/3rd for womens. Despite the efforts of govt the issue remains there due to various factors like the concept of panch patis, discrimination of dalits and atrocities of the SC and STs. The institution must need to looks on these and revise the acts like the atrocities Act for SC & STs, women reservation Act etc. Fraternity: The Brotherhood The word fraternity is enshrined in the preamble as a goal of society. Fraternity means sense of Brotherhood and dignity for all citizens. Though the word of Fraternity is the goal of the Constitution but the various issues are there to undermine the concept like Social and caste inequalities led to fragmented societies. Communalism led to religious polarization, regionalism and linguistic based groups. To overcome these we need to go back on the advice of Dr. B.R Ambedkar who views Equality, liberty and fraternity as the trinity for democracy. To overcome these issue we need to focus on constitutional morality along with inclusive governance and effective government policies and legal actions. The awareness about fraternity need to be taught at schools, colleges. The constitutional ethos has evolved over time and now the various aspects of society - not only moral but environmental ethos are also inculcated into it like the Article 21 - Right to life is organic and evolving over time.
Citizens and local participation: Constitution gave the guarantee of equality, justice, fraternity but only giving the right does not ensure the same one need accessibility and affordability also for example the 73rd & 74th CAA give the democratic participation and Article 39 advocated for free legal aid which will enhance the participation of every sector of citizens like reservation for SC & ST and 1/3rd for womens. Despite the efforts of govt the issue remains there due to various factors like the concept of panch patis, discrimination of dalits and atrocities of the SC and STs. The institution must need to looks on these and revise the acts like the atrocities Act for SC & STs, women reservation Act etc. Fraternity: The Brotherhood The word fraternity is enshrined in the preamble as a goal of society. Fraternity means sense of Brotherhood and dignity for all citizens. Though the word of Fraternity is the goal of the Constitution but the various issues are there to undermine the concept like Social and caste inequalities led to fragmented societies. Communalism led to religious polarization, regionalism and linguistic based groups. To overcome these we need to go back on the advice of Dr. B.R Ambedkar who views Equality, liberty and fraternity as the trinity for democracy. To overcome these issue we need to focus on constitutional morality along with inclusive governance and effective government policies and legal actions. The awareness about fraternity need to be taught at schools, colleges. The constitutional ethos has evolved over time and now the various aspects of society - not only moral but environmental ethos are also inculcated into it like the Article 21 - Right to life is organic and evolving over time.
Conclusion and the Path Forward
it added right to clean environment and fresh air, right to shelter as fundamental rights. Way fwd :- The constitution as a social contract of Rosseau can be understood between citizens and state as citizens give the state legitimate authority. in return state promise - Security, justice, liberty, equality, welfare and dignity. When the state become autocratic the constitutional ethos become weak and virtual. To overcome these hurdles and challenges we need not new constitution but proper implementation and accountability along with inclusion and participation of every sector and institutions. The need of the hour is that we need the constitutional literacy and strong institutions without politics and proper parliamentary functions. The India of 1950 & current is vastly different yet the question remained same. - Constitutional ethos and role of ethos in todays world. and the answer to this question is that. The constitution ethos is the need of hour and to inculcate the ethos we need to adopt this not only in legal terms but as a culture that give life to citizens and democracy.
it added right to clean environment and fresh air, right to shelter as fundamental rights. Way fwd :- The constitution as a social contract of Rosseau can be understood between citizens and state as citizens give the state legitimate authority. in return state promise - Security, justice, liberty, equality, welfare and dignity. When the state become autocratic the constitutional ethos become weak and virtual. To overcome these hurdles and challenges we need not new constitution but proper implementation and accountability along with inclusion and participation of every sector and institutions. The need of the hour is that we need the constitutional literacy and strong institutions without politics and proper parliamentary functions. The India of 1950 & current is vastly different yet the question remained same. - Constitutional ethos and role of ethos in todays world. and the answer to this question is that. The constitution ethos is the need of hour and to inculcate the ethos we need to adopt this not only in legal terms but as a culture that give life to citizens and democracy.
The Art of First Impressions
Your introduction is your one chance to make the examiner want to read more. Think of it as a movie trailer: grab attention, make a promise, and create anticipation. Most students start with definitions - the essay equivalent of 'once upon a time.' Distinguished essays start with intrigue.
"The introduction addresses relevant themes but lacks engagement and clarity."
"Your reference to the historical context of India's independence is a good touch."
"The opening sentence is vague and does not capture immediate interest."
"Strengthen the hook, clarify your thesis, and provide a clearer roadmap for the reader."
You Have:
- Historical context
- General idea of discussing constitutional themes
You Need:
- A compelling hook Hook
- A clear debatable thesis Thesis
- An engaging roadmap Roadmap
The Hook: Your First 10 Words
The hook is your opening punch. It should make the examiner's eyebrows rise, create a question in their mind, or present a tension that demands resolution. Definitions don't do this. Questions, paradoxes, and vivid scenarios do.
Most students start with 'X has been important since ancient times.' This is true but boring. Your hook should be surprising, not safe.
"Constitutional ethos & the current issues."
1 Provocative Question
"Is India's constitutional ethos merely a legal framework, or does it hold deeper moral significance for our society?"
Why it works: This question invites readers to ponder the relevance of constitutional ethos and establishes a debate.
2 Statistic Hook
"With only 12% literacy at independence, could the vision of a united and equitable India have seemed impossible?"
Why it works: Using a striking statistic sets the historical stage and captures interest by framing a challenge.
3 Scenario Hook
"Imagine a nation where equality and justice are mere words on paper. How far has India come since then?"
Why it works: Painting a vivid scenario engages the reader's imagination and sets the tone for discussing constitutional values.
Ask a question that challenges assumptions or creates intellectual tension
In an age of [modern reality], why do [surprising behavior/belief] persist?
Present a contradiction that creates cognitive dissonance
[Concept] promises [X], yet delivers [opposite/unexpected].
Paint a vivid picture with unexpected actors or situations
A [unexpected person 1] does [X]. A [unexpected person 2] does [Y]. [Pattern/Insight].
Lead with a surprising number that demands explanation
[Surprising statistic]. Behind this number lies [deeper truth].
X has been important since ancient times.In today's world, X is very relevant.X is a topic of great significance.Since time immemorial, X has...X can be defined as...
"The first sentence tells the examiner who they're dealing with. A definition says 'average student.' A paradox says 'someone who thinks differently.' First impressions stick."
Foundation: Thesis + Roadmap
Your thesis is your promise to the reader - what you're going to prove. Your roadmap is the journey you'll take them on. Together, they set up your entire essay. A weak foundation means the examiner isn't sure where you're going.
Thesis without a position is just a topic sentence. Roadmap without anticipation is just a table of contents.
"In this essay we are going to discuss the various constitutional morality and ethos..."
1 Crisp Stand
"Despite the constitutional promises of equality and justice, contemporary India grapples with stark realities that challenge these ideals."
Why it works: This statement presents a clear, debatable position and leads to exploration of contradictions in the essay.
2 Debatable Angle
"The relationship between India's constitutional ethos and current societal issues reveals a paradox that demands critical examination."
Why it works: Acknowledging a paradox opens a path for debate and invites the reader to consider multiple viewpoints.
3 Sophisticated Balance
"While the Constitution’s ethos aims for a just society, ongoing inequalities and conflicts expose significant gaps that must be addressed."
Why it works: This nuanced thesis acknowledges the Constitution's strengths while highlighting present challenges, fostering a richer discussion.
Crisp Stand
Clear, direct position with analytical edge
Debatable Angle
Acknowledge counter-view, then take position
Sophisticated Balance
Embrace complexity with a nuanced position
"we will discuss the various constitutional morality and ethos that held the nation..."
1 Natural Flow
"We will explore how constitutional morality underpins our fight for equality, shapes our understanding of justice, and influences social harmony in contemporary India."
Why it works: This narrative weave intrigues the reader about how each theme contributes to the essay.
2 Question-Based
"What role do constitutional values play in addressing the current challenges of inequality and injustice? This essay answers this through an exploration of key constitutional principles."
Why it works: Posing a central question creates an engaging query while still summarizing the content structure.
3 Thematic Preview
"By examining ideologies of equality, justice, and fraternity, we will reveal the essence of constitutional morality in confronting today's challenges."
Why it works: Intriguing thematic references without spoiling the content can stimulate reader interest.
Natural Flow
Weave structure into narrative without listing
Question-Based
Frame structure as questions to be answered
Thematic Preview
Drop intriguing references without explaining
Thesis: "A clear thesis tells the examiner 'I'm going to argue something.' This creates anticipation and gives them a lens to evaluate your essay. No thesis = no argument = lower marks."
Roadmap: "A good roadmap tells the examiner 'this essay is organized and going somewhere interesting.' A list tells them 'this student is mechanical.' Anticipation beats information."
The Opening Polish
Your introduction is the most scrutinized part of your essay. Every word matters. We'll teach you three style techniques that instantly elevate your opening: Parallelism, Antithesis, and Crescendo.
Introductions often suffer from 'playing it safe.' This is exactly when you need to take stylistic risks.
"The language lacks fluency and sophistication, impacting overall engagement."
Parallelism
MissingAntithesis
MissingCrescendo
Missing"on the eve of independence in 1947 the literacy rate of the nation was 12% and the GDP was 3%, the various elites and philosophers was of the opinion that the India will be fragmented due to its plural demography and the illiteracy, yet the architects of constitution led by BR Ambedkar focused on the basic ethos of humanity..."
"Constitutional ethos & the current issues."
"Is India's constitutional ethos merely a collection of legal texts, or does it embody the principles necessary for a just society?"
Parallelism
Repeating grammatical structure for rhythm and emphasis
Antithesis
Placing contrasting ideas in parallel structure to highlight tension
Crescendo
Building from small to large, quiet to loud, personal to universal
The Complete Transformation
See how all the elements come together. This is what a distinguished introduction looks like.
194
Words Before209
Words AfterConstitutional ethos & the current issues. On the eve of independence in 1947 the literacy rate of the nation was 12% and the GDP was 3%, the various elites and philosophers was of the opinion that the India will be fragmented due to its plural demography and the illiteracy, yet the architects of constitution led by BR Ambedkar focused on the basic ethos of humanity and established the Republic Democratic India with focus on equality, justice, liberty, fraternity, socialism and secular aspects which not only led to united India but a prosperous and evolved India. In this essay we are going to discuss the various constitutional morality and ethos that held the nation in its true form like equality, fraternity, justice, liberty and the relation of these ethos with the current scenario and after that we will discuss the contradiction b/w ethos and issues and the remedy of the same and the way forward. Constitution: More than a legal book/manual.
Is India's constitutional ethos merely a collection of legal texts, or does it embody the principles necessary for a just society? As India gained independence in 1947, with a staggering literacy rate of just 12%, fears loomed that its rich diversity might lead to fragmentation. Yet, the visionary architects of our Constitution, led by B.R. Ambedkar, united amid this uncertainty by embedding the fundamental values of justice, equality, and liberty into the framework of our democracy. In this essay, we will explore how these constitutional principles resonate in contemporary India, revealing the contradictions between our ideals and realities, and examining potential pathways forward.
hook
Changed from a vague label to a provocative question.
thesis
Clarified argument regarding the importance of constitutional ethos.
roadmap
Provided a more cohesive preview of what the essay will cover.
language
Enhanced clarity and engagement through varied language.
Ideal Structure
- Hook (attention)
- Thesis (promise)
- Roadmap (anticipation)
Common Mistake
DefinitionVague statementList of sections
Most introductions are forgettable because they play it safe. Distinguished introductions take risks: provocative hooks, debatable theses, and roadmaps that tease.
First Impression Effect
The first paragraph colors the entire reading experience. Start strong and you're read generously.
Differentiation Signal
A unique opening signals 'this student is different.' The examiner pays more attention.
Thesis as Lens
A clear thesis gives the examiner a framework. Without it, they're lost and frustrated.
Anticipation Value
A good roadmap creates eagerness. The examiner looks forward to each section instead of dreading it.
Stage 1 Definition Writer
Focus: Stop opening with definitions
Goal: Recognize boring openings
Stage 2 Hook Crafter
Focus: Master 3 hook types
Goal: Grab attention consistently
Stage 3 Thesis Builder
Focus: State debatable positions
Goal: Make clear arguments
Stage 4 Master Opener
Focus: Integrate all elements with style
Goal: Unforgettable introductions