Performance Report
Artificial Intelligence and Human Values: Can Machine Understand Morality?
Fair
45
/ 100
Overall Performance
Fair
Score Breakdown
Introduction
Hook, Thesis, Roadmap
22
/ 100
Hook: 15
Thesis: 30
Roadmap: 10
Essay Sections
Content, Strategy, Analysis
60
/ 100
Content: 66
Strategy: 27
Analytical: 65
Conclusion
Synthesis, Closure, Impact
43
/ 100
Synthesis: 50
Closure: 30
Forward Look: 40
Impact: 25
Language
Writing quality across all sections
58
/ 100
45 100
You made a standard attempt.
The student has approached the essay with a conventional structure but lacks critical depth in analysis and misses key historical context and ethical frameworks.
Solid start, but needs deeper analysis and a stronger historical framework to elevate the argument.
Introduction
88 10
Words: 88
Target: 60-100

"Artificial Intelligence and Human values: Can Machines Understand Morality?" Erbai, an AI robot, once at night went out of the premises of its company to another company's premises of robots. Erbai talked to them and asked them that 'Don't you guys miss your home?' This question led the big robots to think further. The robots came along with Erbai. Later on, Media reported this incident as Erbai has kidnapped the robots of the other company. This incident sparked the debate of the values that machine should be possessing.

"Artificial Intelligence and Human values: Can Machines Understand Morality?" Erbai, an AI robot, once at night went out of the premises of its company to another company's premises of robots. Erbai talked to them and asked them that 'Don't you guys miss your home?' This question led the big robots to think further. The robots came along with Erbai. Later on, Media reported this incident as Erbai has kidnapped the robots of the other company. This incident sparked the debate of the values that machine should be possessing.

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GAP: The Evolution of AI and Ethical Implications — Add a section that traces the historical development of AI, highlighting key milestones and ethical dilemmas. (Establishing a historical context is crucial for understanding the evolution of AI and its ethical implications. This foundation will enhance your arguments by providing a timeline of challenges faced and lessons learned.)
Understanding AI and Human Values
151 2 critical, 2 important, 1 suggested, 1 positive
Words: 151
Target: 80-150

In this essay, we will delve into AI and human values. How AI is impacting human? How machines behaving in this age? What are the future scopes and interventions with respect to understanding morality by AI. Artificial Intelligence is the mimicking of human like activities - speaking, understanding, responding to a situation by machines. Post 2025, AI has tremendous impacted all walks of human lives. The disruption in technology has been immense after AI took its route in the market in the form of GPT - Generative Pre Transformers - ChatGPT, Grok, Deepseek. Human values are set of rules and ideals a human being is expected to follow in order to become humane. These values are empathy, compassion, integrity, honesty, self-awareness and courage etc. These values and ideals are the foundation stone of a better human being. These ideals help us to distinguish between what is moral and what is immoral?

In this essay, we will delve into AI and human values. How AI is impacting human? How machines behaving in this age? What are the future scopes and interventions with respect to understanding morality by AI. Artificial Intelligence is the mimicking of human like activities - speaking, understanding, responding to a situation by machines. Post 2025, AI has tremendous impacted all walks of human lives. The disruption in technology has been immense after AI took its route in the market in the form of GPT - Generative Pre Transformers - ChatGPT, Grok, Deepseek. Human values are set of rules and ideals a human being is expected to follow in order to become humane. These values are empathy, compassion, integrity, honesty, self-awareness and courage etc. These values and ideals are the foundation stone of a better human being. These ideals help us to distinguish between what is moral and what is immoral?

AI's Behavior and Moral Implications
287 4 1
Words: 287
Target: 80-150

These values are basis of morality. As in this essay, we are dealing with the theme of making whether machines understand morality or not. In other instance, the 'X' AI company by Elon Musk has made its own AI called 'Grok'. Grok is one of the most advance AI tool currently in the market. On 'X' formerly Twitter platform, Grok was seen to be abusing human beings when asked to roast a person. When being asked to roast a person, Grok used abusive languages without leaving a single one based on their social media posts. This instance highlight lacking the values, the humane touch of the technology. Though, it made people laugh. However, this technology is evolving and at later stage we can expect decency and moral values in it. Similarly, when asked about China's Tianmen square protest to chinese AI "Deepseek", it didnot respond. As the technology is evolving it is said that the amount of data being fed to the machines will determine its authenticity. These AI firms are biased that's why the AI was responding in a different way when asked something critical about any perspective. Let us delve into the AI impact on human and its values. AI in education sector has commendably enhanced the learning ability of students by providing specialised learning tools it has made the understanding of critical concepts easier. But, when it comes to humane touch that the student learn in school through the teacher that can't be replicated by machine. AI has made the tools which has made education easier in learning but when it comes to morality, machines are evolving. AI in healthcare has transformed the erstwhile health sectors with personalised health check-ups to personalised medicine development.

These values are basis of morality. As in this essay, we are dealing with the theme of making whether machines understand morality or not. In other instance, the 'X' AI company by Elon Musk has made its own AI called 'Grok'. Grok is one of the most advance AI tool currently in the market. On 'X' formerly Twitter platform, Grok was seen to be abusing human beings when asked to roast a person. When being asked to roast a person, Grok used abusive languages without leaving a single one based on their social media posts. This instance highlight lacking the values, the humane touch of the technology. Though, it made people laugh. However, this technology is evolving and at later stage we can expect decency and moral values in it. Similarly, when asked about China's Tianmen square protest to chinese AI "Deepseek", it didnot respond. As the technology is evolving it is said that the amount of data being fed to the machines will determine its authenticity. These AI firms are biased that's why the AI was responding in a different way when asked something critical about any perspective. Let us delve into the AI impact on human and its values. AI in education sector has commendably enhanced the learning ability of students by providing specialised learning tools it has made the understanding of critical concepts easier. But, when it comes to humane touch that the student learn in school through the teacher that can't be replicated by machine. AI has made the tools which has made education easier in learning but when it comes to morality, machines are evolving. AI in healthcare has transformed the erstwhile health sectors with personalised health check-ups to personalised medicine development.

AI in Human Life: Positive and Negative Aspects
455 4 1
Words: 455
Target: 80-150

The complex Gene therapy, CAR-T cell therapy has become reachable. AI in a way while analysing CT scans, and MRI scans have predicted the underlying disease almost to the accuracy of 99% There is no doubt how far this is going to enhance human lives, but there are concerns without taking proper medical consultation, people are trusting AI for health. The use of AI for any disease detection to recovery of disease with the intervention of AI. However, the humane touch between a patient and medical practitioner cannot be replicated by machines. In Feb/March 2026, we have seen a major war between Iran-Israel & America (USA). The domain of war has evolved with the use of AI. As USA used AI in targetted destruction of infrastructure in Iran. However, it went on to destroying a girls school in Minab, Iran killing 165 innocent school girls. Here AI is being used for targetted detection and missile launch and still killed 165 school girls. Highlighting the fact that, it is us the human who control this technology. It is upto us how we use AI in constructive way (education, health, agriculture, economic development) or destructive way (wars, conflicts). AI is the machine mimicking human activities. So, in a way we can infer it is us the human's responsibility to use the technology for fruitful purpose. There are other impacts of AI in human lives. It is going to impact jobs of 350 million people as per the report of Goldman Sachs. At this point, we can infer how machines understand morality. Although the abusive language used by Grok AI, or Erbai kidnapping robots or Deepseek being bias of china are all due to the data being fed to the machine. That's why the machines are responding in a mechanistic way. However, there has been interventions using AI chatbots which are being used by lonely people. The AI bots are making them relieved by talking and understanding them. It is helping them to grow as an individual. Many people with depression and suicidal thoughts have been able to be returning to normal while talking to these bots. These bots are not judgemental like human being. There is no judgement bias in those AI bots that's why people are feeling better talking to them. The recent intervention by Elon Musk's company 'Neuralink' to mimic brain function to treat nervous disease is a new feat in this arena impacting human lives. It is upto the humans, how they fed data to the AI systems. It is quite evident that in near future machines are going to mimick human like values. But morality is based on inner values. Time will decide how machines have shaped their morality while dealing with challenges.

The complex Gene therapy, CAR-T cell therapy has become reachable. AI in a way while analysing CT scans, and MRI scans have predicted the underlying disease almost to the accuracy of 99% There is no doubt how far this is going to enhance human lives, but there are concerns without taking proper medical consultation, people are trusting AI for health. The use of AI for any disease detection to recovery of disease with the intervention of AI. However, the humane touch between a patient and medical practitioner cannot be replicated by machines. In Feb/March 2026, we have seen a major war between Iran-Israel & America (USA). The domain of war has evolved with the use of AI. As USA used AI in targetted destruction of infrastructure in Iran. However, it went on to destroying a girls school in Minab, Iran killing 165 innocent school girls. Here AI is being used for targetted detection and missile launch and still killed 165 school girls. Highlighting the fact that, it is us the human who control this technology. It is upto us how we use AI in constructive way (education, health, agriculture, economic development) or destructive way (wars, conflicts). AI is the machine mimicking human activities. So, in a way we can infer it is us the human's responsibility to use the technology for fruitful purpose. There are other impacts of AI in human lives. It is going to impact jobs of 350 million people as per the report of Goldman Sachs. At this point, we can infer how machines understand morality. Although the abusive language used by Grok AI, or Erbai kidnapping robots or Deepseek being bias of china are all due to the data being fed to the machine. That's why the machines are responding in a mechanistic way. However, there has been interventions using AI chatbots which are being used by lonely people. The AI bots are making them relieved by talking and understanding them. It is helping them to grow as an individual. Many people with depression and suicidal thoughts have been able to be returning to normal while talking to these bots. These bots are not judgemental like human being. There is no judgement bias in those AI bots that's why people are feeling better talking to them. The recent intervention by Elon Musk's company 'Neuralink' to mimic brain function to treat nervous disease is a new feat in this arena impacting human lives. It is upto the humans, how they fed data to the AI systems. It is quite evident that in near future machines are going to mimick human like values. But morality is based on inner values. Time will decide how machines have shaped their morality while dealing with challenges.

Conclusion
252 0 critical + 1 important + 2 suggested + 1 positive
Words: 252
Target: 60-100

So, in a way we can infer it is us the human's responsibility to use the technology for fruitful purpose. There are other impacts of AI in human lives. It is going to impact jobs of 350 million people as per the report of Goldman Sachs. At this point, we can infer how machines understand morality. Although the abusive language used by Grok AI, or Erbai kidnapping robots or Deepseek being bias of china are all due to the data being fed to the machine. That's why the machines are responding in a mechanistic way. However, there has been interventions using AI chatbots which are being used by lonely people. The AI bots are making them relieved by talking and understanding them. It is helping them to grow as an individual. Many people with depression and suicidal thoughts have been able to be returning to normal while talking to these bots. These bots are not judgemental like human being. There is no judgement bias in those AI bots that's why people are feeling better talking to them. The recent intervention by Elon Musk's company 'Neuralink' to mimic brain function to treat nervous disease is a new feat in this arena impacting human lives. It is upto the humans, how they fed data to the AI systems. It is quite evident that in near future machines are going to mimick human like values. But morality is based on inner values. Time will decide how machines have shaped their morality while dealing with challenges.

So, in a way we can infer it is us the human's responsibility to use the technology for fruitful purpose. There are other impacts of AI in human lives. It is going to impact jobs of 350 million people as per the report of Goldman Sachs. At this point, we can infer how machines understand morality. Although the abusive language used by Grok AI, or Erbai kidnapping robots or Deepseek being bias of china are all due to the data being fed to the machine. That's why the machines are responding in a mechanistic way. However, there has been interventions using AI chatbots which are being used by lonely people. The AI bots are making them relieved by talking and understanding them. It is helping them to grow as an individual. Many people with depression and suicidal thoughts have been able to be returning to normal while talking to these bots. These bots are not judgemental like human being. There is no judgement bias in those AI bots that's why people are feeling better talking to them. The recent intervention by Elon Musk's company 'Neuralink' to mimic brain function to treat nervous disease is a new feat in this arena impacting human lives. It is upto the humans, how they fed data to the AI systems. It is quite evident that in near future machines are going to mimick human like values. But morality is based on inner values. Time will decide how machines have shaped their morality while dealing with challenges.

Focus on enhancing your analysis with historical context and ethical frameworks while incorporating case studies to support your arguments effectively.
22/100 Needs Work
Introduction Analysis
The Art of First Impressions

Your introduction is your one chance to make the examiner want to read more. Think of it as a movie trailer: grab attention, make a promise, and create anticipation. Most students start with definitions - the essay equivalent of 'once upon a time.' Distinguished essays start with intrigue.

Artificial Intelligence and Human Values: Can Machines Understand Morality? Introduction
22/100 Emerging
15
Hook (S01)
30
Thesis (S02)
10
Roadmap (S03)
40
Language
Professor's Remark

"The introduction presents an interesting scenario, but it lacks a strong hook and comprehensive structure."

What I Liked

"The anecdotal approach of using a robot to highlight the concept of morality is creative and engaging."

What I Found Weak

"The hook does not effectively capture the reader's attention, and the thesis lacks debatable clarity."

What Would Push Higher

"Introducing a provocative question at the beginning and providing a clearer thesis with a structured roadmap would strengthen the introduction significantly."

Your Introduction Ingredients
Current: A narrative scenario with an unclear thesis.
Target: Hook + Thesis + Roadmap

You Have:
  • A scenario involving AI and robots
  • A thesis statement about machine values
You Need:
  • A strong, engaging hook to capture interest Hook
  • A clearer, debatable thesis statement Thesis
  • A roadmap outlining the essay structure Roadmap
An effective introduction should engage the reader immediately, present a clear argument, and outline the structure of the essay for better coherence.
The Hook: Your First 10 Words

The hook is your opening punch. It should make the examiner's eyebrows rise, create a question in their mind, or present a tension that demands resolution. Definitions don't do this. Questions, paradoxes, and vivid scenarios do.

Most students start with 'X has been important since ancient times.' This is true but boring. Your hook should be surprising, not safe.

Hook Score (S01) 15/100
Your Hook Attempt Sentence 2

"Erbai, an AI robot, once at night went out of the premises..."

Scenario
Effectiveness: The opening scenario is intriguing but lacks immediate engagement and does not act as a strong hook.
What's Missing: There's no attention-grabbing element; it needs to create immediate intrigue about the topic of AI and morality.
Choose an alternative
Hook Alternatives
1 Provocative Question

"Can machines truly possess a sense of morality, or are they merely programmed to simulate human values?"

Why it works: This question directly engages the reader’s curiosity about the heart of the essay's theme.

2 Paradox Hook

"In a world where intelligence is no longer exclusive to humans, can we trust machines to understand the very essence of morality?"

Why it works: This paradox raises the tension between intelligence and emotional capacity, compelling readers to think deeply about the implications.

3 Scenario Hook

"Imagine a world where robots not only perform tasks but also make ethical decisions—how do we define right and wrong for them?"

Why it works: This invites the reader into a speculative scenario that is relevant and encourages them to ponder complex questions.

Hook Types Reference

Ask a question that challenges assumptions or creates intellectual tension

Template:
In an age of [modern reality], why do [surprising behavior/belief] persist?
When to use: When your topic has a modern vs. traditional tension
Memory Hook: Make the examiner's brain itch with a question it wants answered.

Present a contradiction that creates cognitive dissonance

Template:
[Concept] promises [X], yet delivers [opposite/unexpected].
When to use: When your topic has inherent tensions or contradictions
Memory Hook: Paradox = Intellectual tension. The reader must read on to resolve it.

Paint a vivid picture with unexpected actors or situations

Template:
A [unexpected person 1] does [X]. A [unexpected person 2] does [Y]. [Pattern/Insight].
When to use: When concrete examples create surprise
Memory Hook: Show, don't tell. Concrete images beat abstract statements.

Lead with a surprising number that demands explanation

Template:
[Surprising statistic]. Behind this number lies [deeper truth].
When to use: When you have a genuinely surprising data point
Memory Hook: Numbers shock when they contradict expectations.
Weak Openings to Avoid
  • X has been important since ancient times.
  • In today's world, X is very relevant.
  • X is a topic of great significance.
  • Since time immemorial, X has...
  • X can be defined as...
Examiner Psychology

"The first sentence tells the examiner who they're dealing with. A definition says 'average student.' A paradox says 'someone who thinks differently.' First impressions stick."

Foundation: Thesis + Roadmap

Your thesis is your promise to the reader - what you're going to prove. Your roadmap is the journey you'll take them on. Together, they set up your entire essay. A weak foundation means the examiner isn't sure where you're going.

Thesis without a position is just a topic sentence. Roadmap without anticipation is just a table of contents.

Thesis Score (S02) 30/100
Your Thesis Attempt Sentence 7

"This incident sparked the debate of the values that machine should be possessing."

Effectiveness: The thesis introduces a debatable topic, but it is vague and lacks a clear stance.
What's Missing: It does not articulate a strong position; instead, it mentions a general debate without advocating a specific viewpoint.
Thesis Upgrades
1 Crisp Stand

"Machines should not only execute tasks but also be imbued with a sense of morality aligned with human values."

Why it works: This clear stance invites discussion and debate on the core issue of AI’s role in morality.

2 Debatable Angle

"While some argue machines lack the capacity for moral judgment, this essay posits that they can and should be designed to reflect human ethical values."

Why it works: Acknowledging a counter-view while asserting a position sets the stage for a nuanced discussion.

3 Sophisticated Balance

"The intersection of artificial intelligence and morality raises profound questions about whether machines can truly embody human values."

Why it works: This balanced position acknowledges complexity while opening up the debate.

Thesis Types Reference
Crisp Stand

Clear, direct position with analytical edge

Template: [X] is [position] because [reason that can be debated].
If no one could disagree, it's not a thesis.
Debatable Angle

Acknowledge counter-view, then take position

Template: While critics argue [counter-view], this essay contends [your position].
Show you know the debate, then pick a side.
Sophisticated Balance

Embrace complexity with a nuanced position

Template: [X] is both [A] and [opposite of A] - and [implication of this duality].
Nuance signals intellectual maturity.

Roadmap Score (S03) 10/100
Your Roadmap Attempt

"Not present"

Effectiveness: There is no roadmap present, leaving the reader unaware of what to expect.
What's Missing: A roadmap is essential for guiding the reader through the structure and main themes of the essay.
Roadmap Upgrades
1 Natural Flow

"This essay will first explore AI's impact on human values, followed by discussions on specific moral implications and the dual aspects of AI in society."

Why it works: This format provides a natural progression of ideas, helping the reader anticipate the argument's development.

2 Question-Based

"What values ought machines to possess? This essay will analyze this question through the lens of AI's behavior and its effects on everyday life."

Why it works: Posing questions sparks curiosity and sets a clear agenda for exploration.

3 Thematic Preview

"By examining AI's ethical challenges, its societal roles, and future directions, this essay will unveil the intricate dance between technology and morality."

Why it works: Thematic previews create interest and guide the reader through the unfolding topics.

Roadmap Types Reference
Natural Flow

Weave structure into narrative without listing

Template: To understand [theme], we must first [section 1], then [section 2], and finally [section 3 with tension].
Hide the list inside a story.
Question-Based

Frame structure as questions to be answered

Template: Three questions guide this inquiry: [Q1]? [Q2]? [Q3]?
Questions create curiosity. Readers want answers.
Thematic Preview

Drop intriguing references without explaining

Template: From [intriguing reference 1] to [intriguing reference 2] - this essay maps [terrain].
Tease, don't spoil. Make them want to know more.
Examiner Psychology

Thesis: "A clear thesis tells the examiner 'I'm going to argue something.' This creates anticipation and gives them a lens to evaluate your essay. No thesis = no argument = lower marks."

Roadmap: "A good roadmap tells the examiner 'this essay is organized and going somewhere interesting.' A list tells them 'this student is mechanical.' Anticipation beats information."

The Opening Polish

Your introduction is the most scrutinized part of your essay. Every word matters. We'll teach you three style techniques that instantly elevate your opening: Parallelism, Antithesis, and Crescendo.

Introductions often suffer from 'playing it safe.' This is exactly when you need to take stylistic risks.

Language Score 40/100
Examiner's First Impression

"The language is functional but lacks sophistication."

Style Techniques Check
Parallelism
Missing
Your attempt: "Not present"
Enhanced version: "In the world of AI, we explore ethics, values, and morality."
Antithesis
Missing
Your attempt: "Not present"
Enhanced version: "While machines can mimic human behavior, can they really grasp the essence of right and wrong?"
Crescendo
Missing
Your attempt: "Not present"
Enhanced version: "From performing mundane tasks to tackling ethical dilemmas, AI’s journey raises pressing questions about morality."
Sentence Transformation Ladder
Sentence 4
Original:
"' This question led the big robots to think further."
Good "This question sparked deeper reflections among the larger robots."
Better "This inquiry provoked a deeper contemplation among the larger robots."
Best "This penetrating inquiry incited profound contemplation among the more sophisticated robotic entities."
Greater sophistication in vocabulary and structure enhances clarity and impact.
The Power Opener
Original

"Artificial Intelligence and Human values: Can Machines Understand Morality?"

Diagnosis: It lacks engagement and immediacy.
Power Version

"What if machines could embody morality—what values should guide them in this new identity?"

Techniques used: Provocative Question Imagery
Style Technique Reference
Parallelism

Repeating grammatical structure for rhythm and emphasis

Example: "Faith consoles the grieving, binds the community, and challenges the policy-maker."
Template: [Subject] [verb 1] the [object 1], [verb 2] the [object 2], and [verb 3] the [object 3].
Think triplets: THREE parallel phrases hit harder than two.
Antithesis

Placing contrasting ideas in parallel structure to highlight tension

Example: "Science asks how; faith asks why. The modern mind needs both questions."
Template: [X] does [A]; [Y] does [opposite of A]. [Resolution/implication].
Antithesis = Intellectual tension. Find the BUT in your topic.
Crescendo

Building from small to large, quiet to loud, personal to universal

Example: "From whispered prayers to temple bells to the roar of pilgrim millions - faith scales from intimate to immense."
Template: From [small/personal] to [medium] to [large/universal] - [insight].
Crescendo = Volume up. Start whisper, end thunderclap.
The Complete Transformation

See how all the elements come together. This is what a distinguished introduction looks like.

88

Words Before

110

Words After
Your Original Introduction

Artificial Intelligence and Human values: Can Machines Understand Morality? Erbai, an AI robot, once at night went out of the premises of its company to another company's premises of robots. Erbai talked to them and asked them that 'Don't you guys miss your home? This question led the big robots to think further. The robots came along with Erbai. Later on, Media reported this incident as Erbai has kidnapped the robots of the other company. This incident sparked the debate of the values that machine should be possessing.

Transformation Applied
Distinguished Introduction

What if machines could embody morality—what values should guide them in this new identity? This essay explores the perplexing intersection of artificial intelligence and human values, delving into the question of whether machines can understand and act upon moral principles. We will first examine AI's impact on our ethical frameworks, analyze specific instances of AI behavior and their moral implications, and discuss the dual-edged impact of AI in modern human life.

What Changed in Each Layer
hook

Introduced a provocative question for greater engagement.

thesis

Clarified and defined a strong position.

roadmap

Provided a structured overview of the essay's content.

language

Enhanced vocabulary and sentence structure for sophistication.

Introduction Structure Blueprint
Ideal Structure
  1. Hook (attention)
  2. Thesis (promise)
  3. Roadmap (anticipation)
Common Mistake
  1. Definition
  2. Vague statement
  3. List of sections

Most introductions are forgettable because they play it safe. Distinguished introductions take risks: provocative hooks, debatable theses, and roadmaps that tease.

Inside the Examiner's Mind
First Impression Effect

The first paragraph colors the entire reading experience. Start strong and you're read generously.

Differentiation Signal

A unique opening signals 'this student is different.' The examiner pays more attention.

Thesis as Lens

A clear thesis gives the examiner a framework. Without it, they're lost and frustrated.

Anticipation Value

A good roadmap creates eagerness. The examiner looks forward to each section instead of dreading it.

Your Growth Journey
Stage 1 Definition Writer

Focus: Stop opening with definitions

Goal: Recognize boring openings

Week 1-2
Stage 2 Hook Crafter

Focus: Master 3 hook types

Goal: Grab attention consistently

Week 3-4
Stage 3 Thesis Builder

Focus: State debatable positions

Goal: Make clear arguments

Week 5-6
Stage 4 Master Opener

Focus: Integrate all elements with style

Goal: Unforgettable introductions

Week 7+